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Term 3 Writing
I am learning to
Make my writing more interesting and easier to read
Success Criteria
Include many ideas in my stories.
Put a capital letter that the beginning of each idea.
Put a full stop at the end of each idea.
Teacher Feedback
Bella, you have included six ideas in your writing about our morning in the garden and you have put a fullstop at the end of each idea.
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